The dispatch #4.
Commentary
The author went to three movie theaters. She rated all the theaters from best to worst.
Nobody was quoted in the story
The lead sentence was good.
it was a statement
I liked the drawing of the popcorn because it was pretty cool.
There were only 2 pictures on the page and they were both pretty good.
I would probably want to take pictures of a play because its really colorful and theirs a lot to take a picture of.
I thought it was very good. The only bad thing was that it was pretty plain. It was just a bag of popcorn next to some tickets.
News
The story is about the changes coming to Bowie. Mostly about the plan to build a parking garage where the tennis courts are right now.
The strongest quote was the one where a girl said she was said that she was sad that they were building a parking garage because she didn't get a painting on her parking spot.
Yes it was very intriguing.
It was a quote.
There was only 1 photo and it was the picture of the school mapped out.
I liked the photo in the paper.
I would do a sports story because i like sports.
The issue was good. The photo was very well detailed and all in all very good.
Feature
The story is about how senior Seth Werchan stole 44 bases. Also a bunch of stuff about him.
The quote from his coach. Its the strongest because if your coach talks about you highly it means you must be pretty good.
Its pretty good but not super good.
It was a quote from his teammate.
The picture of Seth stealing a base is pretty cool.
I like it because its a good picture taken at the perfect time.
I liked all the photos on the paper.
I would do this story because i like baseball and this seems like a cool story.
I liked this issue. the picture was good and the story was entertaining.
Sports
The story is about senior Hailey Atwood and how good she is at basketball. Also ow she balances sports with academics.
Her teammates and coach were all quoted
The quote from his coach. Its the strongest because if your coach talks about you highly it means you must be pretty good.
The lead sentence was good.
It was a quote
I like the one when she is going up for a rebound.
I like it because it is taken at the perfect moment.
I didn't think any of the pictures were bad.
I would do a story about baseball because i like baseball.
This issue was good i didn't think there were any weak points.
In Depth
The story is about immigration. It talks about seeking refuge and all kinds of stuff.
There were a couple students quoted
The strongest one was one that said He talked to someone in el Salvador and a gang was after him.
The conclusion as a quote
I liked the statue of liberty drawing.
I like it because it is very well drawn.
I didn't dislike any but i thought the pictures were a little bland.
I would do a story about baseball because i like baseball.
This issue was very good just maybe more pictures.
The author went to three movie theaters. She rated all the theaters from best to worst.
Nobody was quoted in the story
The lead sentence was good.
it was a statement
I liked the drawing of the popcorn because it was pretty cool.
There were only 2 pictures on the page and they were both pretty good.
I would probably want to take pictures of a play because its really colorful and theirs a lot to take a picture of.
I thought it was very good. The only bad thing was that it was pretty plain. It was just a bag of popcorn next to some tickets.
News
The story is about the changes coming to Bowie. Mostly about the plan to build a parking garage where the tennis courts are right now.
The strongest quote was the one where a girl said she was said that she was sad that they were building a parking garage because she didn't get a painting on her parking spot.
Yes it was very intriguing.
It was a quote.
There was only 1 photo and it was the picture of the school mapped out.
I liked the photo in the paper.
I would do a sports story because i like sports.
The issue was good. The photo was very well detailed and all in all very good.
Feature
The story is about how senior Seth Werchan stole 44 bases. Also a bunch of stuff about him.
The quote from his coach. Its the strongest because if your coach talks about you highly it means you must be pretty good.
Its pretty good but not super good.
It was a quote from his teammate.
The picture of Seth stealing a base is pretty cool.
I like it because its a good picture taken at the perfect time.
I liked all the photos on the paper.
I would do this story because i like baseball and this seems like a cool story.
I liked this issue. the picture was good and the story was entertaining.
Sports
The story is about senior Hailey Atwood and how good she is at basketball. Also ow she balances sports with academics.
Her teammates and coach were all quoted
The quote from his coach. Its the strongest because if your coach talks about you highly it means you must be pretty good.
The lead sentence was good.
It was a quote
I like the one when she is going up for a rebound.
I like it because it is taken at the perfect moment.
I didn't think any of the pictures were bad.
I would do a story about baseball because i like baseball.
This issue was good i didn't think there were any weak points.
In Depth
The story is about immigration. It talks about seeking refuge and all kinds of stuff.
There were a couple students quoted
The strongest one was one that said He talked to someone in el Salvador and a gang was after him.
The conclusion as a quote
I liked the statue of liberty drawing.
I like it because it is very well drawn.
I didn't dislike any but i thought the pictures were a little bland.
I would do a story about baseball because i like baseball.
This issue was very good just maybe more pictures.
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