Jake A journalism 1

1. Your cover should stand out 2. The screen is the wrong size, no matter how big it is. 3. vivid colors might come out of the printer as a dull color. 4. make your magazine about things people like. 5. make your magazine pull people in by having a unique cover. I like this picture because it is the back of the car. The car itself is very cool and old. Also i think the grey kind of foggy background really helps set the mood and make the picture even better. The headline being at the op is fine. I also like how the words are in the very middle. Also it is in turquoise blue which goes with the background. All in all this is a very cool picture.

Commentary The author went to three movie theaters. She rated all the theaters from best to worst. Nobody was quoted in the story The lead sentence was good. it was a statement I liked the drawing of the popcorn because it was pretty cool. There were only 2 pictures on the page and they were both pretty good. I would probably want to take pictures of a play because its really colorful and theirs a lot to take a picture of. I thought it was very good. The only bad thing was that it was pretty plain. It was just a bag of popcorn next to some tickets. News The story is about the changes coming to Bowie. Mostly about the plan to build a parking garage where the tennis courts are right now. The strongest quote was the one where a girl said she was said that she was sad that they were building a parking garage because she didn't get a painting on her parking spot. Yes it was very intriguing. It was a quote. There was only 1 photo and it was the picture of the school mapped...

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