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Painted parking spots stir up debate about criteria
1. who- reporter Katie Holmes
what- parking spots in Bowie
where- Bowie high school
when- October 2018
why- should there be boundaries on things allowed to be painted on parking spots.
2. A student had a silhouette of the Taj mahal on his parking spot. Another student complained about it even though there are other parking spots showing christianity.
3. Saiyed and mr.Robinson were both sources and it was a direct quote they used.
4. Every time she started a new idea she would start it with a quote.
5. yes because there is a debate about if their should be limits on what you put on your parking spot.
6. There is no photo.
crazy climate calls for air conditioning
1.who- reporter Shruti Patel
what- should be have air conditioning
where- Bowie high school
when- October 2018
why- The school has no air conditioning
how- install air conditioning
2. people are either super hot or super cold when they are in Bowie. So student and staff want to pit air conditioning in the hallways.
3. Mr Robinson, Miranda Cardenas, and Jeni Garcia. there quotes are direct quotes.
4. There aren't many transitions but a lot of quotes.
5. yes it is a good title for the story.
6.yes
Construction creates congestion
1.who- editor in chef Cianna Chairez
what- construction creates more traffic.
where-Mopac
when- 2018
why- To stop all the traffic on Mopac.
how- To stop construction.
2. people are mad because all this construction is causing a lot of traffic. people are not getting to their destination fast enough.
3. Richardson ,Darcy Kanneman, Rolan, and Davis. They are all direct quotes.
4. There are not any transitions.
5. yes the headline makes sense for the story.
6. yes there is a little map and it helps understand all about the traffic areas.
OPINIONS
Ideacide and you: the guide to avoiding self-censoring
1. Ian miller
2. The school is stopping self censoring
3. students should feel comfortable around staff.
4. no
5. no he stuck mostly to what he was arguing
6. no
7. 1st person
A. an opinion piece does not have to be 100% accurate and a factual piece does.
B. because his point might not be true.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
Understanding political perspectives
1. Carter Scruggs
2. do people really understand political perspectives
3. everything we do is right at the tips of our fingers and there is a lot of fake stuff out there.
4. No
5. no
6. no
7. 1st person
A. A factual piece has to be true and backed up by facts and a opinion piece does not.
B. there is nothing you can really put for a picture on this article.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
ids spark debate
1. Ian miller
2. Ids are a good thing in this school
3. Ids are a good idea in this school.
4. No
5. No
6. No
7. 1st person
A. An opinion is just how you feel about something and doesn't have to be backed up by facts.
B. It is just his opinion and no picture is needed.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
Purpose vs plastic
1. Jake Brian
2. do we need ids in Bowie
3. No we do need ids in bowie
4. no
5.No
6.No
7. 1st person
A. An opinion is just how you feel about something and doesn't have to be backed up by facts.
B. It is just his opinion and no picture is needed.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus for school.
Chat With Nat
1. Natalie Mann
2. it costs a lot of money to apply and take tests for college.
3. it should not cost that much money to apply and do everything for college.
4. No
5. No
6. No
7. 1st person
A. An opinion is just how you feel about something and doesn't have to be backed up by facts.
B. It is just his opinion and no picture is needed.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
Painted parking spots stir up debate about criteria
1. who- reporter Katie Holmes
what- parking spots in Bowie
where- Bowie high school
when- October 2018
why- should there be boundaries on things allowed to be painted on parking spots.
2. A student had a silhouette of the Taj mahal on his parking spot. Another student complained about it even though there are other parking spots showing christianity.
3. Saiyed and mr.Robinson were both sources and it was a direct quote they used.
4. Every time she started a new idea she would start it with a quote.
5. yes because there is a debate about if their should be limits on what you put on your parking spot.
6. There is no photo.
crazy climate calls for air conditioning
1.who- reporter Shruti Patel
what- should be have air conditioning
where- Bowie high school
when- October 2018
why- The school has no air conditioning
how- install air conditioning
2. people are either super hot or super cold when they are in Bowie. So student and staff want to pit air conditioning in the hallways.
3. Mr Robinson, Miranda Cardenas, and Jeni Garcia. there quotes are direct quotes.
4. There aren't many transitions but a lot of quotes.
5. yes it is a good title for the story.
6.yes
Construction creates congestion
1.who- editor in chef Cianna Chairez
what- construction creates more traffic.
where-Mopac
when- 2018
why- To stop all the traffic on Mopac.
how- To stop construction.
2. people are mad because all this construction is causing a lot of traffic. people are not getting to their destination fast enough.
3. Richardson ,Darcy Kanneman, Rolan, and Davis. They are all direct quotes.
4. There are not any transitions.
5. yes the headline makes sense for the story.
6. yes there is a little map and it helps understand all about the traffic areas.
OPINIONS
Ideacide and you: the guide to avoiding self-censoring
1. Ian miller
2. The school is stopping self censoring
3. students should feel comfortable around staff.
4. no
5. no he stuck mostly to what he was arguing
6. no
7. 1st person
A. an opinion piece does not have to be 100% accurate and a factual piece does.
B. because his point might not be true.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
Understanding political perspectives
1. Carter Scruggs
2. do people really understand political perspectives
3. everything we do is right at the tips of our fingers and there is a lot of fake stuff out there.
4. No
5. no
6. no
7. 1st person
A. A factual piece has to be true and backed up by facts and a opinion piece does not.
B. there is nothing you can really put for a picture on this article.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
ids spark debate
1. Ian miller
2. Ids are a good thing in this school
3. Ids are a good idea in this school.
4. No
5. No
6. No
7. 1st person
A. An opinion is just how you feel about something and doesn't have to be backed up by facts.
B. It is just his opinion and no picture is needed.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
Purpose vs plastic
1. Jake Brian
2. do we need ids in Bowie
3. No we do need ids in bowie
4. no
5.No
6.No
7. 1st person
A. An opinion is just how you feel about something and doesn't have to be backed up by facts.
B. It is just his opinion and no picture is needed.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus for school.
Chat With Nat
1. Natalie Mann
2. it costs a lot of money to apply and take tests for college.
3. it should not cost that much money to apply and do everything for college.
4. No
5. No
6. No
7. 1st person
A. An opinion is just how you feel about something and doesn't have to be backed up by facts.
B. It is just his opinion and no picture is needed.
C. should people be able to put whatever they want on parking spots. Should be have ids. and should freshman be able to leave campus during lunch.
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